Jayson, I thought your elevator pitch was great. Aside from having an interesting product idea your pitch presentation was spot you! You dressed professionally and spoke with peep that peaked my interest. Your hand gestures and body movements also made the pitch look and feel more professional. I also thought your call to action saying, “we need your help” was a great way to wrap up your pitch and also get the listener involved.
Jayson, I think you did a great job with your elevator pitch. It was quick and to the point, but still got the idea across. I like how you did not go too much into detail about the technology of the bracelet, which some people might not understand. Instead, you made it simple and appealing to everyone. Great job!
Jayson, I think your elevator pitch was very well done! I liked how you used hand gestures and how your pitch flowed smoothly and was easy to understand. Presentation wise - you dressed professionally and moved around to make the pitch more personable and engaging. I think you ended on a strong note with the call to action to get your bracelets "on the shelves" and it emphasized your energy and eagerness for your product!
Your elevator pitch was very well executed! You provided a lot of interesting information that was both relevant and relatable. I could tell you know your product very well and what the problem is. In terms of how you presented it, you were dressed well and you gestured which really helped with staying interested in your elevator pitch. Really cool!
Your elevator pitch was very good! You provided a wide array of facts and knowledge to show you understood the topic and that provided key details for your pitch. I really like the way you presented yourself in the video. You dressed like a true professional and had great posture that expressed confidence. Overall, great pitch and you had great hand gestures to compliment the pitch.
Jayson, You did a great job with your pitch, you were dynamic and involved with your "audience." I also found your idea interesting and a great way to help fix an issue that thousands of citizens have. You also provided how the product would work which was helpful as a listener, it was apparent that you had thought through your product and how it would help a user. Great job!
Jayson,
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was great. Aside from having an interesting product idea your pitch presentation was spot you! You dressed professionally and spoke with peep that peaked my interest. Your hand gestures and body movements also made the pitch look and feel more professional. I also thought your call to action saying, “we need your help” was a great way to wrap up your pitch and also get the listener involved.
Jayson,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with your elevator pitch. It was quick and to the point, but still got the idea across. I like how you did not go too much into detail about the technology of the bracelet, which some people might not understand. Instead, you made it simple and appealing to everyone. Great job!
Jayson,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch was very well done! I liked how you used hand gestures and how your pitch flowed smoothly and was easy to understand. Presentation wise - you dressed professionally and moved around to make the pitch more personable and engaging. I think you ended on a strong note with the call to action to get your bracelets "on the shelves" and it emphasized your energy and eagerness for your product!
Jayson,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very well executed! You provided a lot of interesting information that was both relevant and relatable. I could tell you know your product very well and what the problem is. In terms of how you presented it, you were dressed well and you gestured which really helped with staying interested in your elevator pitch.
Really cool!
Jayson,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very good! You provided a wide array of facts and knowledge to show you understood the topic and that provided key details for your pitch. I really like the way you presented yourself in the video. You dressed like a true professional and had great posture that expressed confidence. Overall, great pitch and you had great hand gestures to compliment the pitch.
Jayson,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with your pitch, you were dynamic and involved with your "audience." I also found your idea interesting and a great way to help fix an issue that thousands of citizens have. You also provided how the product would work which was helpful as a listener, it was apparent that you had thought through your product and how it would help a user. Great job!